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Old 07-08-2017, 06:07 PM
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Default Hired Puns - a text-based game on life as a freelance writer

Hi everyone,

I've come up with a brief text-based game about life as a freelance writer. I had hoped it could be a helpful resource for people who were just getting into the business, or for clients who were looking into hiring them. I would love to hear feedback, and hoped you can give me your thoughts?

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Old 07-08-2017, 06:08 PM
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Here's the link by the way:

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Old 07-16-2017, 10:45 AM
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I'm reading/playing it right now and so far it's entertaining.

However, I did find two problems on your first page.

1. You wrote, "but this weighs heavily in your mind." It should be "but this weighs heavily ON your mind."

2. I work in my pajamas all of the time. Why dress up if I'm sitting at home all day? I'm not trying to impress anyone.

I'll let you know if I have any more comments as I play through it. Neat concept, btw!
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