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Old 07-25-2014, 08:04 AM
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Smile My freelance website - can you give me feedback?

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Old 07-27-2014, 04:15 PM
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Thanks so much!!
Hi...Your sight looks nice, but the grammatical errors must be fixed. For example in the section under "Recent Post" you wrote "Articles I"ve Wrote," It should read "Articles I've Written," or better yet, "Article Samples." There are too many I's as well on your home page. However, this is not to kill your site, you are trying to get it together like most of us. Good luck...
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Old 07-28-2014, 09:42 AM
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Also, the capitalization... if you are going to use title caps for your subheadings or bullet points, then do it for all of them. A writing website should have zero grammatical and stylistic errors, so go through every page, including your samples, with an eagle eye and fix any typos or other mistakes.
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Old 07-28-2014, 02:32 PM
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Also, the capitalization... if you are going to use title caps for your subheadings or bullet points, then do it for all of them. A writing website should have zero grammatical and stylistic errors, so go through every page, including your samples, with an eagle eye and fix any typos or other mistakes.
Agree. When I hire subcontractors if there are spelling, grammar, or capitalization errors on their website or in their emails to me, I don't even respond. If you are advertising yourself as a writing professional, everything must be error free.
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Old 07-29-2014, 02:58 AM
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Thank you everyone so much!! I am fixing things as we speak ;-)
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