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Old 05-21-2008, 10:34 AM
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Hey all! I need an opinion!
I have a meeting tomorrow am, and I have to do a 30 sec blurb about my business.
Unfortunately I am alone in the office today with no one to run this by.
So- can I bounce this off you all??
How does this sound?


Hi- I am (Me!), and I am with Send Out Cards.
Did you know there is a way that- right from your own computer-you can upload your picture to a real physical top quality greeting card- have it signed in your own handwriting- have it put into a real envelope- stamped with a real first class stamp-and mailed for you- all for under a dollar?
Did you know you can send that same card out to 100 of your favorite clients- all in less time than it took me to say this?
When you send a card you make an impression. You stand out- because you care. And you will be remembered.
You can`t do that with an e-mail.

Well- what do you all think? What would you change?
Thank you!
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Old 05-21-2008, 10:57 AM
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Hmm- maybe I`ll add this-
When you send a card you make an impression. You stand out- because you care. And you will be remembered.
Especially if yousend that card with a box of our deliciousbrownies!
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Old 05-21-2008, 01:43 PM
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I would begin by making it all about them,

asking them, "Are you happy with your client/prospect... retention?

Do you have all of the business that you want?"

Areyou or anyone you know looking for a truly unique way tocreate a stream of income while you/they are building your/their primary income?"


Just some thoughts......

Talk from your heart!

Have FUN!


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Old 05-21-2008, 06:49 PM
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Thanks Lori!
And I will. (Have fun)
That`s one of my new rules you know- I no longer do anything (Business wise) that isn`t going to be fun.
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Old 05-21-2008, 08:02 PM
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That's why I got OUT of the Corporate World!

This world is a BLAST!


I'm sure you'll do a great blurb at your meeting!



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