Trulyfreereadings.com

[KayMaxim]

The traditional way to do a squeeze page, which is what you have... is to have a large title on top, focusing on something that people would respond to emotionally, presenting a problem perhaps.... then a sentence or so under it that gives a solution, again emotional words... and then bullet points, pointing out what you have to offer...such as if you xxx then this is for you.

Put in your opt in form next to the bullet points.

Keep it all really simple.

Leave out the visa, etc. logos on the bottom. Since you are promoting a free give away. It is too soon to bring up any reference to money.

For instance you could say in large font... Are You Sick And Tired Of Not Getting Solutions To Your Problems?
Then smaller font... If You Want Direction In Your Life, Then This Is For You.
Then bullet points and even smaller font...
If you are tired of struggling in the dark, then let me help you.
If you want to know answers to the mysteries of your life, .....
If you have always wanted to try a psycic reading but didn't want to spend the money...

Maybe 4 to 5 of these bullet points and then in the opt in section, put Get your FREE psychic reading now.

Check out your successful competiton. I am sure you can come up with better emotional words than I can.

Good luck my dear in your new biz.

[KayMaxim]

Originally Posted by DougC

A domain name should match the site and yours is so deceptive. Trulyfreereadings offers just a chance at 1 person a month getting 1 free reading the rest have to pay. Now how is that trulyfree???? Trulyfreereadings would all be free yet you already have the Paypal buttons up to collect money.

Shame for using a trick domain name to lure people in. Remember Karma. It's people like you using deceptive and false advertising that give the rest of us honest business people a bad name. Thanks alot.

Good point on the domain name, but come on... be kind to someone who is just starting out with internet marketling. She DID ask you your advice. Just give your advice nicely without assuming bad motives. She is just learning.

[DougC]

Assuming bad motives? How much more blatant could it have gotten.

This thread should really close. The person that opened it, in her last post, made it sound like she would do the right thing and I believe she will. Let's not keep kicking a dead horse.

[Suzanne82]

A domain name should match the site and yours is so deceptive. Trulyfreereadings offers just a chance at 1 person a month getting 1 free reading the rest have to pay. Now how is that trulyfree???? Trulyfreereadings would all be free yet you already have the Paypal buttons up to collect money.

[WardenofMagick]

I've been to your site, and I don't understand its' purpose. The reading process, how to get/purchase a reading, is not explained. If I am going to give out my contact information for anything, I like to know what I'm getting before I fill in my personal details, including my email address. I see no reason to visit trulyfreereadings.com again because what can I do there? There's nothing for me to read, learn, or do. Add content, flesh out the site some. You are losing a lot of visitors to your site by not laying it out and explaining its' purpose clearly to your visitors. Additionally, your bio page is not very personal, you want it to be inviting not limiting. Your clients don't have a name to call you.